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two that makes one by ~funky-banana-man:iconfunky-banana-man:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


thy eyes are like circumsferes
that keep my heart in a
round perfect roundness,
like in a bottle of water,
like in a glass of wine,
like in a ball of fire,
i cant escape.
my senses are numb,
my sight distorted
my hands dont touch
my ears dont hear
my mouth cant taste.
in my soul is one from the four,
just you burning over all
like that shining star burning in the sky.
the one over all,
the single one that possesses me,
the fire.

you know how it feels,
the burn in the heart.
your burn in my heart,
my burn in my heart.
a dream?
i like dreaming.
dont you?
lets dream together.
you,
me,
two that makes one.
©2009 ~funky-banana-man
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Author's Comments

my soul is yours.
is your soul mine?
will it shine like allways,
like a renewing circle?
or, like a flower that blooms,
will it fade away?
is it a mix of the four,
meant forever?
ask afrodite, jealous of you,
she said
No! No!
i said,
Yes! Yes!


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for Joanna. :D :D :D

the four are the four elements. before someone makes a nice coment about orgies or sth, right mr squirrel??

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~ataquedosesquilos Apr 6, 2009, 11:13:27 AM
cmon it sounded cool didnt it? it was kick ass wisdom right at him



i dont know, i was looking for something depressing xD

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~funky-banana-man Apr 7, 2009, 8:24:47 AM
not really, u can only be my bitch..:P but our romance is meant to last!!
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~funky-banana-man Apr 7, 2009, 8:28:21 AM
from slovakia?? hehhe what did they want from a guy like u? wanted u to get away i bet..
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~funky-banana-man Apr 7, 2009, 8:29:07 AM
ii know it doesnt exist..:D

atao como andam as coisas por ai?? andas a xorar pelos cantos com saudades minhas??
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~ataquedosesquilos Apr 7, 2009, 11:54:23 AM
ahaha yeah yeah, they were nice, im kinda seing laura, a german girl, shes nice, if u come here in may ill introduce her to u, but shes going in queimas to germany

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Apr 7, 2009, 11:54:49 AM
ohhh cmon what we had was beautifall, and now u letting it go, ull know what u lost after u lose it

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Apr 7, 2009, 12:00:02 PM
nooo way, there is!


vao andando, tenho andando ocupado, nem nestas ferias de pascoa tenho tempo, é incrivel, tenho andando com a laura, e a tua relaçao, é seria? shall i be afraid?

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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