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two that makes one by ~funky-banana-man:iconfunky-banana-man:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


thy eyes are like circumsferes
that keep my heart in a
round perfect roundness,
like in a bottle of water,
like in a glass of wine,
like in a ball of fire,
i cant escape.
my senses are numb,
my sight distorted
my hands dont touch
my ears dont hear
my mouth cant taste.
in my soul is one from the four,
just you burning over all
like that shining star burning in the sky.
the one over all,
the single one that possesses me,
the fire.

you know how it feels,
the burn in the heart.
your burn in my heart,
my burn in my heart.
a dream?
i like dreaming.
dont you?
lets dream together.
you,
me,
two that makes one.
©2009 ~funky-banana-man
:iconfunky-banana-man:

Author's Comments

my soul is yours.
is your soul mine?
will it shine like allways,
like a renewing circle?
or, like a flower that blooms,
will it fade away?
is it a mix of the four,
meant forever?
ask afrodite, jealous of you,
she said
No! No!
i said,
Yes! Yes!


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for Joanna. :D :D :D

the four are the four elements. before someone makes a nice coment about orgies or sth, right mr squirrel??

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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 26, 2009, 3:13:39 PM
u praising me, what do u want? i feel something coming up


no! im a tensai, a tensai, squirrly the tensai

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 26, 2009, 3:14:39 PM
thats between me and my secrets about others feelings


btw i meet some girls from slovack they have the cool *franja

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 26, 2009, 3:15:47 PM
i didnt, mean filthy as filthy of piggy way, but as a bad person, like gotham streets, a bad person, but yeah thats pretty decent for a bad person



yeah! urs dont exist!

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~Shaolin5archangel Mar 28, 2009, 2:36:17 PM
Its a metaphor!!!!!!! come on man!! its poetry!! nice job btw

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"What is power, without the knowledge to use it?"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 29, 2009, 11:09:52 AM
ohhh cmon, whats that, are u a menber of the club of gay poets of fabio? hes the leader and cheerleader

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~Shaolin5archangel Mar 29, 2009, 2:13:58 PM
god bless you my friend. you need it

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"What is power, without the knowledge to use it?"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 29, 2009, 10:25:24 PM
no my friend, god bless us all, or we're lost

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~funky-banana-man Apr 5, 2009, 10:42:47 AM
its joanna, u jerk. :P s calhar vamos a pt em maio..:D
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~Cosmic-Rocket-Man Apr 6, 2009, 3:53:03 AM
club of gay poets of fabio?


hahaha.. er.. mm..


what are u doing here?

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"Thank you for being this morning's farmer."
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~ataquedosesquilos Apr 6, 2009, 3:53:51 AM
what? whats about me? what are we now? are u throwing up our romance away?

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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