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two that makes one by ~funky-banana-man:iconfunky-banana-man:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


thy eyes are like circumsferes
that keep my heart in a
round perfect roundness,
like in a bottle of water,
like in a glass of wine,
like in a ball of fire,
i cant escape.
my senses are numb,
my sight distorted
my hands dont touch
my ears dont hear
my mouth cant taste.
in my soul is one from the four,
just you burning over all
like that shining star burning in the sky.
the one over all,
the single one that possesses me,
the fire.

you know how it feels,
the burn in the heart.
your burn in my heart,
my burn in my heart.
a dream?
i like dreaming.
dont you?
lets dream together.
you,
me,
two that makes one.
©2009 ~funky-banana-man
:iconfunky-banana-man:

Author's Comments

my soul is yours.
is your soul mine?
will it shine like allways,
like a renewing circle?
or, like a flower that blooms,
will it fade away?
is it a mix of the four,
meant forever?
ask afrodite, jealous of you,
she said
No! No!
i said,
Yes! Yes!


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for Joanna. :D :D :D

the four are the four elements. before someone makes a nice coment about orgies or sth, right mr squirrel??

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:iconfunky-banana-man:
~funky-banana-man Mar 25, 2009, 7:00:27 AM
"Before you kissed me only winds of heaven Had kissed me." are u virgin?? :P

thanks for poem, it was sooooo sweeeeet!
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 25, 2009, 11:21:19 AM
yeah u sure dont use one :P




portugal withouth you, is like AWESOME, yeah it became a better place, not filthy and perverted

--
"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 25, 2009, 11:21:48 AM
u havent answered me! but yeah i know how se feels like pretty well

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 25, 2009, 11:22:05 AM
thank u, im the genious lovely guy

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 25, 2009, 11:22:44 AM
yeah is he right? why arent u answering my questions?



i totally kicked ass yesterday, am i getting a bigger asshole?

--
"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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~funky-banana-man Mar 26, 2009, 6:01:48 AM
u tottally kicked ass?? and yeah u r increasing ur asshole status..:P

which question i didnt answer?? i dont wanna go check the original coment..:P
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~funky-banana-man Mar 26, 2009, 6:02:13 AM
not the genius..but lovely..hmm can be.:P
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~funky-banana-man Mar 26, 2009, 6:04:01 AM
pervert i can understand, but filthy?? u gotta be jocking..i shower everyday! i think, a week has 3 days right??

i dont use one?? hahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha u and ur math!
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~ataquedosesquilos Mar 26, 2009, 2:44:17 PM
i see, thank u, i been working hard, its dificult to be the master



cmon tell me ur feelings for hannah, u didnt answered it, u shy

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"well it's been a long time, long time now, since I've seen you smile"
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