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I walk in the dark,
Step by step I try to touch something.
Nothing.
I hear a voice,
This one i try to
Follow, listen and smile, like a lover does.
The echo in the empty keeps me away,
And i run, and allways fall,
While i look for you my dear,
Follow your voice and your smile
In this pitch black dark..i follow you and
I wouldn't mind
To stand in this dark
For all and all my eternity..only if
At the end i could reach you.
©2008-2009 ~funky-banana-man
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eh..i hate titles..

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:iconshaolin5archangel:
Oh wow. i love this . especially how it ends. I think you should give this poem another look and polish/add more to it. very nice

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"What is power, without the knowledge to use it?"
:iconfunky-banana-man:
i will take ur request in consideration and see what im able to do! :D glad u liked it. :D

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