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My love,
Can't you see a mark?
The mark of your steps
Deep in my heart?
A trail I follow.
In the front,
The light hits you and
In the shadow I walk.
With  my big steps
I
Cant catch up with your small ones.
But you are there
Right in front of my eyes,
Space less
My hands cant touch you.
Space less
Your shadow runs around
All along with me when
Around I run to see,
Your face, your eyes, your smile.
Desperate, heartless, restless
I run and run and run.
Tired I fall on the ground,
It is cold and wet and dark.
Again with tears falling
All way down my face,
I get up. My strength leaves me,
On the ground I lay
And I look up.  Everything is
Cold, dark, tired, pointless.

--

My lady, you are
The one that allows the sun
To shine endlessly.
Why cant it pierce the dark shadows that so deep
Hide hidden the wanted light?

As a dieing tree, whose leaves
Fall,
Dead,
Distant of the lifefull light
That lightens the green happiness
To, green, the little leaves  bless my world
And for a tomorrow allow me a fight.

The tree is dead,
A body looking towards the sky.
O my lady, tell me, why,
Why isnt yet my heart filled with dread?

Dark, destroyed, dead,
Cold, constrained,
failed
I
Still want to see your smile.
©2008-2009 ~funky-banana-man
:iconfunky-banana-man:

Author's Comments

it is hard to know u cant win but still you cant quit..anyway, we gotta try, allways face forward and go forward..??

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:iconshaolin5archangel:
OMG!!!! I can relate so much with this poem. Iam currently having a long distance relationship and im broke. :( , nice work man. Very vidid and honest

--
"What is power, without the knowledge to use it?"
:iconfunky-banana-man:
thanks man! sorry u r broke..and about the long distance..cant say anything..long distance in there might be a really shitty long distance, right??
:iconfunky-banana-man:
shit, i made a coment and it didnt post..:S

thanks man!

sorry u r broke, but it could be worse,l money comes and goes.. and in the us a long distance might be a really long one..how far is it??
:iconshaolin5archangel:
yeah I suppose. she lives 60 miles away. it doesnt seem like alot, but when your working,studying, and other crap, its hard

--
"What is power, without the knowledge to use it?"
:iconfunky-banana-man:
hehehe it could be worse..:P do ur best!

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